IB English HL · Literary analysis
Symbolism in The Great Gatsby
Version v2
What Markmate flagged
- →Thesis moved to the final sentence of para 1 in v2 — now reads as a claim, not a topic.
- →Mechanics still sitting on DEV — comma splice after the para-3 quote.
- →Next pass should add a close-read sentence after the para-2 quote — currently the quote sits alone.